Reading Kate Dolan's period romances may make a romance fan of me yet. Her latest, The
Appearance of Impropriety, is a pure delight. Lieutenant Hayward Elliott, like many returning
veterans no matter the time period, is home from war, trying to find a well-paying position so
that he can support his mother and sisters. When he enters the Bayles household to interview for
an opening as land steward, his life becomes intertwined with that of Miss Sophie Bayles, the
oldest daughter of the household. But it isn't all roses. In fact, Sophie's temper flies at the
young lieutenant when he reacts negatively to being in the line of fire of an egg dropped by
Sophie's young house guest, Helen. Sophie's actions cause Lt. Elliott to lose this financial
opportunity and soon Sophie rues her temper and seeks a way to make amends by finding him
employment. The comedy of errors that follows revolves around station and social place and has
both humorous moments and moments of deep despair. Sometimes, it looks as if no good deed goes
unpunished.
I admired Sophie's spunk and determination, which was quite out of character for most young
ladies in her position. And young Lt. Elliott proves himself to be of noble character, even in
the most dire circumstances. My favorite character, though, was young Helen, a budding scientist
who had only been experimenting when Lt. Elliott happened upon her falling egg. Helen reminded
me a lot of Luna Lovegood in the Harry Potter movies and books, a socially odd character but
with an uncommonly brilliant mind and a good heart. Helen was indeed as intelligent as Luna,
and equally at odds with society.
The Appearance of Impropriety is a fast read, but a fun one. Dolan paints this period
of England quite well, making you want to linger over the pages—if you weren't in such a
hurry to find out how it all turns out. This book has a lot of the same themes as Jane Austen's
Pride and
Prejudice, and fans of classic literature would find it quite appealing, and easier to
tackle, because Dolan's language is clearer, without the conventions of writers of Austen's
time. Very well done!