In part three of her "All the King's Men" series, Margaret Mallory reveals the on-again,
off-again romance between Sir James Rayburn and Lady Linnet. Jamie, a brave knight who once
offered marriage to Linnet in their younger days before she coldly rejected him, vowed never
to fall under her spell again. Yet when he sees her five years after their initial affair,
he experiences those familiar feelings of love and lust.
Likewise, Linnet still holds fond memories of Jamie as a young man, but has put her love
life on hold until she can settle an old score with garment merchants who cheated her
grandfather and ruined his business. This long-standing grudge and secret mission to expose
the guilty parties have consumed Linnet nearly to the point of madness. How else can we explain
her dangerous exploration into a witches' coven in pursuit of her vengeance and her shabby
treatment of Jamie, who once again opens his heart to her? Linnet’s foolish actions may seem
like madness to readers, or perhaps merely an annoyance that she’s yet another historical
romance character who repeatedly sabotages her chances for health and happiness through her own
stubbornness.
Although the witches, magic potions, and devil-worshipping subplots have some basis in
reality (a historical note says that Eleanor Cobham [a minor character in the story] was
convicted of using sorcery and witchcraft), these disturbing scenes don’t mesh with the rest
of the romance novel. Even repeated foreshadowing that warns readers about the eventual arrival
of these horrific scenes doesn’t seem like sufficient preparation.
In addition, Margaret Mallory links characters from the previous novels in this series
(Knight of Desire
and Knight of Pleasure,
also reviewed on Myshelf.com), which complicates the plot with more people, places, and
subplots than can adequately be absorbed by most readers. For me, these two earlier novels
were more enjoyable than Mallory’s latest attempt. Between the main romance, a tangential
romance, political intrigue, witchcraft, the garment merchant mystery, and extraneous details
relating to Jamie’s heritage and Linnet’s family, the story can seem ungainly at times. I would
have preferred to read more about the passion of one knight and the lady he loves.